Hum hai na

Tanhaiyaan duniya se chupaya jaati hai
apno se nai
rote toh aap hai
phir bhi humari ankhen bhar aati hai
le lijiye sari khusiyaan humari
aur apne gham humare naam kar jaiye
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  1. #1 by shaguftaabbas on June 16, 2010 - 4:33 PM

    apne hote hain toh tanhai ka ehsaas nahi honay detay..

    • #2 by hoiden on June 16, 2010 - 5:29 PM

      wah wah…lekin uske pehle aisa koi hona chahiye yo sachhe dil se apna ho….sory if my hindi is grammatically wrong…i’m working on it… thanks for ur comments:)

  2. #3 by shaguftaabbas on June 17, 2010 - 1:02 PM

    yeh toh hai.. aj kal ‘apnon’ ko pana sapno mei he possible hota hai..

    lol no dear it’s perfect!

    • #4 by hoiden on June 17, 2010 - 2:11 PM

      haan afsos sapne bas sapne hote hai…except for those lucky few…
      lols thanks…

  3. #5 by Kavita on July 13, 2010 - 7:10 AM

    Wah … kya baat keh di aapne!! Too good!!!

    I suck at shaayari !!! So I have no right to comment…
    But fir bhi… (let me give it a shot… please chuck it if you hate it!!)
    Bhala gham koi apnon ke naam karta hai
    Aap ho to bas saath khushiyaan hain,
    Aur koi gham paas nahi
    Aisa mera jee kehta hai.. 🙂

    Heheheh.. Keep writing…
    I would LOVE to read more shayari from you…
    Have a great week ahead!!!

    • #6 by hoiden on July 13, 2010 - 9:34 AM

      i’m no expert…n i tink urs is great:) ah wel there are no experts here…so wat d heck…cheers for great writers (like us)…wink wink

      • #7 by Kavita on July 13, 2010 - 4:19 PM

        Absolutely!! 🙂
        Cheers…

  4. #8 by hoiden on July 13, 2010 - 9:34 AM

    oh n shukriya:)

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