Last Bow

The lights go out

and the crowd goes wild

i stand up

and take a bow

And when i turn back

and look upon my memories,

i cannot separate

the stage from me…

i pick a rose

from me feet,

the sweet bloom

sets my heart free…

I wonder

who would be

by my side

as i exit my last stage

even as I’m surrounded today…

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  1. #1 by Jingle on June 14, 2010 - 4:09 PM

    lovely poem,
    glad that you find my place..
    welcome to join our weekly Thursday Poets Rally…

  2. #3 by suzicate on June 15, 2010 - 2:49 AM

    I was caught right up in the moment with you. Our passions live within us and is hard to seperate at times.

    • #4 by hoiden on June 16, 2010 - 2:06 PM

      Thank u for reading:)

  3. #5 by brian miller on June 15, 2010 - 3:14 AM

    great poem…it is interesting how many want to be around when you are in teh lime light but fade with the fame…

    • #6 by hoiden on June 16, 2010 - 1:20 AM

      yes its really sad…but they say u know ur friends in difficult times and i say also when ur not a somebody any longer…thats very true…thanks for reading:)

  4. #7 by brokensally on June 15, 2010 - 11:31 AM

    Very nice words and feelings

  5. #9 by shaguftaabbas on June 16, 2010 - 8:51 AM

    beautifully written!
    (:

    • #10 by hoiden on June 16, 2010 - 1:55 PM

      thank u so much for reading:)

  6. #11 by Andy Veilleux on June 17, 2010 - 6:55 PM

    cryptic and sad, but I like that sometimes 🙂 Good poem!

    • #12 by hoiden on June 18, 2010 - 1:08 AM

      glad u liked it:)thank u for reading:)

  7. #13 by Julie Niklas on June 18, 2010 - 3:36 AM

    Awesome, I think we’ve all wondered about this before.
    Good job on making it relevant and concise.

  8. #15 by caroompas on June 18, 2010 - 4:19 PM

    Nicely done. As a performer, I really relate to the lights going out, the crowd going wild, and that last exit, the one with the rose. . . well done.

    • #16 by hoiden on June 19, 2010 - 1:39 AM

      thanks…
      cool…dance?drama?Singing?

  9. #17 by Desiree on June 20, 2010 - 10:19 AM

    Wooow.. I love your weblog! Great pictures and poems! Keep it up! xoxx

    • #18 by hoiden on June 21, 2010 - 1:10 AM

      Thank u so much for bein so kind:)

  10. #19 by dustus on June 23, 2010 - 12:51 PM

    great poem… intriguing how point out that the performer and performance may seem indistinguishable.

    • #20 by hoiden on June 24, 2010 - 1:34 AM

      🙂 afterall performance is a part of the performer:) thank u for reading

  11. #21 by Lady Vea on September 2, 2010 - 11:17 PM

    Very moving words – also did you take that photograph? It is amazing, if you did not can you direct me to the source, I would love a print.

    Kind regards,
    Lady Vea

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