Nobody’s Angel (for UDPS)

Lightning flash

Pouring rain

Steeped in the shadows of the night

I walk upon the cobbled street

Unmindful of the cold

That has long ago

Seeped into my bones

The steady stream washes away

The blood from my hands

They leer at me

As I step thro’ the door

And cry and plead

As I pull out my gun

I feel no mercy

For these dregs of the society

They say I look like an angel

So sweet and so pure

But the fact remains

That I’m so cold

I’m Nobody’s Angel


this is my first poem for Undead Poets Society…hope u like it…

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  1. #1 by DiamondsAndDogs on July 21, 2010 - 3:21 AM

    Liked it very much! Dark and compelling. Very nice

    Regards…

    • #2 by hoiden on July 21, 2010 - 3:29 AM

      great:):)thank u:)

  2. #3 by lesliepaints on July 21, 2010 - 3:21 AM

    The cold, the rain and a cobbled street are great settings to conjure someone called “Nobody’s Angel”. I like this Hoiden.

  3. #5 by fiveloaf on July 21, 2010 - 3:50 AM

    great job hoiden..

  4. #7 by buttercup600 on July 21, 2010 - 4:37 AM

    Wow…you painted a vivid image on the canvas with your words…and absolutly loved the picture!! You Rock girlfriend X

    • #8 by hoiden on July 21, 2010 - 4:15 PM

      thank u amanda:):)

  5. #9 by Kavita on July 21, 2010 - 8:40 AM

    The image is FANTABULOUS!!! The poem, DARK and WOW!!!
    Welcome to One Shot, girl… 🙂

    • #10 by hoiden on July 21, 2010 - 4:15 PM

      right on….thank u kavitha:)

  6. #11 by brenda w on July 21, 2010 - 3:03 PM

    Loving the cobbled streets, pouring rain…you bring a feeling of place to the reader. The last line cements the narrator’s character. Well done! ~Brenda

    • #12 by hoiden on July 21, 2010 - 4:15 PM

      thank u branda for stopping by:)

  7. #13 by Tim Keeton on July 23, 2010 - 1:13 PM

    Awesomeness, Hoiden.

    How very undead of you…

    Rhyme on!

    Tim Keeton
    (Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales

    • #14 by hoiden on July 24, 2010 - 2:41 AM

      Thank u Tim:) glad u thought so:)

  8. #15 by Anky0112 on August 2, 2010 - 4:11 PM

    Vivid 😉
    I added you in my blogroll

  9. #17 by trisha on August 21, 2010 - 2:02 PM

    quite thoughtprovoking and a wonderful poem. well, she can be a dark angel but not a kind one.

    • #18 by hoiden on August 22, 2010 - 2:38 PM

      yup xactly:)thanks for stopping by:)

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