Lightning flash
Pouring rain
Steeped in the shadows of the night
I walk upon the cobbled street
Unmindful of the cold
That has long ago
Seeped into my bones
The steady stream washes away
The blood from my hands
They leer at me
As I step thro’ the door
And cry and plead
As I pull out my gun
I feel no mercy
For these dregs of the society
They say I look like an angel
So sweet and so pure
But the fact remains
That I’m so cold
I’m Nobody’s Angel
this is my first poem for Undead Poets Society…hope u like it…
Hoiden's Blog 
#1 by DiamondsAndDogs on July 21, 2010 - 3:21 AM
Liked it very much! Dark and compelling. Very nice
Regards…
#2 by hoiden on July 21, 2010 - 3:29 AM
great:):)thank u:)
#3 by lesliepaints on July 21, 2010 - 3:21 AM
The cold, the rain and a cobbled street are great settings to conjure someone called “Nobody’s Angel”. I like this Hoiden.
#4 by hoiden on July 21, 2010 - 3:30 AM
thank u:):):)
#5 by fiveloaf on July 21, 2010 - 3:50 AM
great job hoiden..
#6 by hoiden on July 21, 2010 - 4:14 PM
thank u:):)
#7 by buttercup600 on July 21, 2010 - 4:37 AM
Wow…you painted a vivid image on the canvas with your words…and absolutly loved the picture!! You Rock girlfriend X
#8 by hoiden on July 21, 2010 - 4:15 PM
thank u amanda:):)
#9 by Kavita on July 21, 2010 - 8:40 AM
The image is FANTABULOUS!!! The poem, DARK and WOW!!!
Welcome to One Shot, girl… 🙂
#10 by hoiden on July 21, 2010 - 4:15 PM
right on….thank u kavitha:)
#11 by brenda w on July 21, 2010 - 3:03 PM
Loving the cobbled streets, pouring rain…you bring a feeling of place to the reader. The last line cements the narrator’s character. Well done! ~Brenda
#12 by hoiden on July 21, 2010 - 4:15 PM
thank u branda for stopping by:)
#13 by Tim Keeton on July 23, 2010 - 1:13 PM
Awesomeness, Hoiden.
How very undead of you…
Rhyme on!
Tim Keeton
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
#14 by hoiden on July 24, 2010 - 2:41 AM
Thank u Tim:) glad u thought so:)
#15 by Anky0112 on August 2, 2010 - 4:11 PM
Vivid 😉
I added you in my blogroll
#16 by hoiden on August 2, 2010 - 4:39 PM
smile:):) thank u:)
#17 by trisha on August 21, 2010 - 2:02 PM
quite thoughtprovoking and a wonderful poem. well, she can be a dark angel but not a kind one.
#18 by hoiden on August 22, 2010 - 2:38 PM
yup xactly:)thanks for stopping by:)