Legion


He looks so white and pure
But as the moonlight
Shines down
Bathing him in its light
The white washes away
And he stands tall
A legion of the dark
Black wings like a raven
Flutter unfurled in the breeze
As he dives to the ground
They run
Who cant stay straight
For want of a spine


This one is for Undead poets

Nope…havent seen the movie…just saw the poster….

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  1. #1 by Diamonds & Dogs on August 4, 2010 - 4:39 PM

    Nicely done. The movie was amazing by the way. Definitely worth checking out.

    • #2 by hoiden on August 5, 2010 - 1:21 AM

      oh ok…will do for sure:)

  2. #3 by Kavita on August 4, 2010 - 6:44 PM

    WOW!! They should’ve put this poem in the ad campaign for the movie!
    I especially loved the last 2 lines…

    And Giiiirrrlllll… this telepathy bug is REALLY in some mood! Just last night, I wrote a poem (not published yet) and I titled it flutter flutter…and now I read your poem!!! So I am gonna change the title of my poem before I publish it!! Phheewww 🙂

    • #4 by hoiden on August 5, 2010 - 1:23 AM

      woah…thats some compliment from u n amanda…lols…wat s happening???:D:D wats ur oem abt…Dont tell me…i’l check out myself:)

  3. #5 by buttercup600 on August 5, 2010 - 1:17 AM

    I so agree with Kavita on this….ad campaign for sure!!!..It’s awesome writing…at it’s best!! Love yah girl xxx

    • #6 by hoiden on August 5, 2010 - 1:23 AM

      thank u amanda n kavita…some praise…smiles n hugs…lov the both of u:)

  4. #7 by Jingle on August 5, 2010 - 1:38 AM

    your image is very powerful!
    very well written poem!

  5. #9 by deadpoet88 on August 5, 2010 - 5:49 AM

    This is amazing! great piece! Loved the last two lines especially!

  6. #10 by Jingle on August 5, 2010 - 6:37 PM

  7. #12 by Gally Lines ~ LestISmiteThee.wordpress.com on August 7, 2010 - 2:36 AM

    Lovely, dark poetry :3

  8. #14 by Mama Zen on August 7, 2010 - 4:46 AM

    This is outstanding!

  9. #16 by reedssss on August 8, 2010 - 3:20 PM

    lovelyyyyyyy

  10. #18 by souldose on August 8, 2010 - 5:50 PM

    Simply Beautiful

  11. #20 by Desiree on August 8, 2010 - 11:03 PM

    Wow, this is amazing! :O

  12. #22 by Jan Freeman on August 9, 2010 - 6:35 AM

    You nicely grip the mystery and suspense 🙂

  13. #24 by Doraz on August 9, 2010 - 4:54 PM

    The movie was worth the ride. Nice words. Hope all is well and you have a great week. 🙂

  14. #26 by Ilakya Spandhanaa on August 9, 2010 - 6:36 PM

    I back Amanda and Kavita.. if the Legion crew came across this piece of yours, trust me, they are gonna want it in billboards in no time.. 😉 Too good Vandanaa!!

    • #27 by hoiden on August 10, 2010 - 2:29 AM

      haha…thanks a lot:)

  15. #28 by Anky0112 on August 9, 2010 - 7:25 PM

    wow…!!!
    amazing work…. i haven’t watch the movie either but you poem is totally worth reading…
    keep rocking!!!

    • #29 by hoiden on August 10, 2010 - 2:29 AM

      thanks:)have a great day:)

  16. #30 by Collin on August 10, 2010 - 7:53 AM

    Lovely poem.

  17. #33 by trisha on August 10, 2010 - 4:58 PM

    really, really beautiful. i loved the drama you have built in the poem. disappearing illusion.

  18. #34 by Jamie Dedes on August 11, 2010 - 4:40 PM

    Powerful. Striking. Takes my breath away.

    Another winner, Hoiden. 🙂

    You’re good. No doubt.

  19. #36 by RiikaInfinityy on August 12, 2010 - 6:16 AM

    That was a great movie and this is a even wonderful poem to go with the movie, wonderful! :D~

  20. #41 by RD Carter on October 1, 2010 - 8:14 PM

    Just found your blog. Love the poem…the topic. I’m joining the conversation. Check out my take. Your words are yummy!

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