The lighter side-Thursday Rally-Week 33

This poem was written for my friend who was feeling low to cheer her up…its for  fun….so if someone reading this is offended, I’m really sorry. its not my intention to hurt anyone…

For the others enjoy and did I miss something????

Men…they live amongst us

The creepy guy

Who lives down the block

The night show host

Who just loves to talk

The punk with the funky ‘do’

The cool jock

You want to hang on to

The uber smart nerd

Who’ll just blow your mind

The secret crush

You seek at the corner of your eye

The entertainer

Who tickles your funny bone

The incredibly shy

The one with the wandering eye

The fiery volcano

You’d better run for the roof

The vengeful kind

Who you’d better beware

The egoistic jerk

What more is to say

The boy next door

The one you think you know

The charming thief

Who’ll make you swoon

To his honeyed tones

The super sweet guy

Who you shouldn’t let go

The silent and strong hunk

For whom you go to movies for

And then the Zen

Just around the bend

Oh these men

What would we do with

And without them!!!

  1. #1 by deadpoet88 on December 2, 2010 - 9:26 AM

    Great poem! Really fun to read. I often wonder myself, what will we do with and without them! 😛

  2. #3 by Jingle on December 2, 2010 - 1:15 PM

    pleasant read, thanks for the contribution!
    I am tickled to have you back with us.

    • #4 by hoiden on December 2, 2010 - 7:03 PM


  3. #5 by dldselfnarration on December 2, 2010 - 2:26 PM

    no offense taken! But I’d rather wallow in your words of all these men, whom, i’m afraid…
    we All know!

  4. #7 by Marya on December 2, 2010 - 3:27 PM

    Awesome poem, your such a great poet, have an awesome day

  5. #9 by lynnaima on December 2, 2010 - 5:48 PM

    lol, lol, lol there is this picture that gives the answer it said: “women would grow happilly fat without any problems without men” lol

    • #10 by hoiden on December 2, 2010 - 7:04 PM

      how true…but it would be boring too wen women hav none to fight with:)tks for stopping by:)

  6. #11 by Kavita on December 2, 2010 - 7:20 PM

    hahaha…very very well said, girl!! Reminds me of U2’s ‘with or without you’ 🙂 They evade and they cheat evade..some are smart and some are sweet.. but whatever/however they are, they are here FOR us alright! Be it to bug the hell outta us, or to make us feel like princesses! 😉
    I shall term your poem as a cute ode to men (not sure if they’ll be sporting enough though :))

    Boooooooooooooyyy (aarrrggg!! Okay, giiiiiiiirrrrrrrrrllllllllll) It’s so nice to see you BACK in action!! Please DO NOT slip into another hiatus now.. will you?!?!? Today, I was REALLY wondering where the hell you are, and so I opened up your blog (I know it by rote)…and suddenly, PING!! A new email! Oh.. a comment for a post of mine.. and it was from youuuuuuuuuu… for a moment, i kinda freaked out .. but then i thought it’s okay after all.. we haven’t forgotten each other.. heheh

    • #12 by hoiden on December 3, 2010 - 2:34 AM

      Forget u all???No way girl!!!I solemnly swear that i wont take such a long hiatus…if i can help it….Gosh i missed bloggin…nice to see ur comment after long time:)
      lols ya…not many are sporting abt it…

  7. #13 by Fyodor Lewis on December 2, 2010 - 7:57 PM

    Fun stuff. I don’t know which category I fit under though… I’m somewhere between nerd and strong silent type. I’m much stronger and taller than your average nerd. 😛

    • #14 by hoiden on December 3, 2010 - 2:22 AM

      lols…shud i include u???
      thank u…its nice that ur so sporting abt this…

  8. #15 by Bodhirose on December 2, 2010 - 10:51 PM

    Yes, they live amongst us–this totally different species! 🙂

    So cute, I hope your friend was cheered by this–I was.

    • #16 by hoiden on December 3, 2010 - 2:17 AM

      she was:) n tks for stoppin by:)

  9. #17 by heather grace stewart on December 3, 2010 - 1:51 AM

    Ha! I totally needed this this week. Thanks for the chuckle.

    • #18 by hoiden on December 3, 2010 - 2:17 AM

      ur welcome:) n tks for stoppin by:)

  10. #19 by The Reason You Come on December 3, 2010 - 11:27 AM

    Men…they’re the biggest source of our headaches, but we sure still want them! 😉 I really enjoyed reading this!

    • #20 by hoiden on December 4, 2010 - 1:06 AM

      So true:)thanks for stoppin by:)

  11. #21 by liv2write2day on December 4, 2010 - 1:49 AM

    Fun post, Hoiden. I think I’ve met all of these guys at one time or another. I think this is my first visit to you blog…hope to see more of it in the future.

    • #22 by hoiden on December 4, 2010 - 3:02 PM

      :)i do hope so…u have a lovely blog btw…first time at ur blog for me as well…tks for stoppin by:)

  12. #23 by brian on December 4, 2010 - 2:52 AM

    hey there…been a while since i was over here…what can i say…yes some men…smiles.

    • #24 by hoiden on December 4, 2010 - 3:00 PM

      yep been a while nice to read ur poem..n c ur comment:)tks for stoppin by…yes ur rgt sme men…so wich one are u???lols…no offence

  13. #25 by somewhere else on December 4, 2010 - 3:07 AM

    very fun – yes, men, we do love them in spite of ourselves…

    • #26 by hoiden on December 4, 2010 - 3:03 PM

      tat v do:)tks for stoppin by:)

  14. #27 by moondustwriter on December 6, 2010 - 6:37 AM

    Ha!!! Great to see you
    miss you guys just cant “do it all”

    moonie smiles

    • #28 by hoiden on December 6, 2010 - 1:54 PM

      🙂 hoiden smiles:)

  15. #29 by Olivia on December 6, 2010 - 10:10 AM

    Very well crafted..!!
    keep Writing My Dear.. 🙂

  16. #31 by Olivia on December 6, 2010 - 10:11 AM

    How is everything?
    Are you interested in theme writing? Do have poems related to dreams, visions, or reveries?
    If YES, welcome linking your poems to our potluck week 13 at Jingle
    Poetry :
    Even if your answer is no, you are more than welcome to link in old poems, or poems unrelated to our theme (dreams, visions, or reveries) and enjoy the fun of sharing and encouraging!
    Our week 13 potluck is open Sunday, 8pm, American Central Time…We will be thrilled to see you in…
    Let me know if you have questions

    • #32 by hoiden on December 6, 2010 - 1:55 PM

      sure will join in…dreams u say:)cool:)

  17. #33 by Olivia on December 6, 2010 - 10:12 AM

    Glad to see you back in action- xox

  18. #35 by Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved on December 6, 2010 - 5:30 PM

    It’s been tooooo long since I’ve visited you, Hoiden.

    This just tickled me, and what a kind thing to do for your friend. Kudos on both.

    Poem on … Happy Rally Days! 🙂

    • #36 by hoiden on December 7, 2010 - 1:40 AM

      tks jamie:)nice to c u here after a long time:)

  19. #37 by Ina on December 6, 2010 - 9:42 PM

    Lovely poem, and yes, everyone counts 🙂

    • #38 by hoiden on December 7, 2010 - 1:41 AM

      :)tks for stoppin by

  20. #39 by buttercup600 on December 8, 2010 - 4:49 AM

    Been missing your wonderful talent gifted girl!!! This one I read twice…GREAT POST!!! Sending you much love and many hugs xoxox

    • #40 by hoiden on December 9, 2010 - 2:16 AM

      missed all of u 2….nice to see ur comment:)lots of love:)

  21. #41 by Short Poems on December 8, 2010 - 7:30 AM

    Pleasant read, love it 🙂

  22. #43 by bet365 on December 15, 2010 - 11:59 AM

    hello I was fortunate to find your Topics in google
    your subject is splendid
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    btw the theme of you blog is really outstanding
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    • #44 by hoiden on December 16, 2010 - 2:21 AM

      tks:)its a custom theme on wordpress

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